Hi Brodie. Your plan shows a really good summary of points you will make in your explanation. Im interested to see how you bring all of these ideas together. You will need to make sure as you are writing that it doesn't sound like a set of instructions. Eg: If you begin your sentence with the word "Always" it sounds like you're instructing the reader.
You could talk about how dry deep sand works to suck your vehicle down and how driving on wet sand does the same thing. You could talk about how the 4WD changes what the vehicle can do and how it works to help lift the vehicle out. I hope that makes sense. You have chosen a topic every local could appreciate!
Hi Brodie. Your plan shows a really good summary of points you will make in your explanation. Im interested to see how you bring all of these ideas together. You will need to make sure as you are writing that it doesn't sound like a set of instructions. Eg: If you begin your sentence with the word "Always" it sounds like you're instructing the reader.
ReplyDeleteYou could talk about how dry deep sand works to suck your vehicle down and how driving on wet sand does the same thing. You could talk about how the 4WD changes what the vehicle can do and how it works to help lift the vehicle out.
I hope that makes sense. You have chosen a topic every local could appreciate!
Thanks Miss O'Dea that feedback was great! thank you.
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