This looks great Brodie! I like the way you have classified what rain is in your opening statement. You have added information without explaining the process. You have done that later on in the body of the writing, which is perfect. Next week we will look at connecting everything together to help it flow. In the mean time I want you to think about how you could add to your conclusion by adding a general fast or something interesting about rain. I love your effort in this task.
This looks great Brodie! I like the way you have classified what rain is in your opening statement. You have added information without explaining the process. You have done that later on in the body of the writing, which is perfect. Next week we will look at connecting everything together to help it flow. In the mean time I want you to think about how you could add to your conclusion by adding a general fast or something interesting about rain. I love your effort in this task.
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