Great work Brodie - you have included good examples of descriptive words and phrases. Remember to use the dictionary and/or thesaurus to help you with your word choice, some of the words you have used have been used out of context. Continue to grow your vocabulary, the quality of your writing will improve immensely! - Mrs T
Great work Brodie - you have included good examples of descriptive words and phrases. Remember to use the dictionary and/or thesaurus to help you with your word choice, some of the words you have used have been used out of context. Continue to grow your vocabulary, the quality of your writing will improve immensely! - Mrs T
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