I am a Year 8 student at Ahipara School in Northland, NZ. I am in Room 3 and my teacher is Mrs Takimoana.
What a very creative and imaginative narrative about you and your friend Brodie - the dragon sounds to be very protective. To increase the tension of your story, vary your sentences for impact. Great work - keep it up! - Mrs T
What a very creative and imaginative narrative about you and your friend Brodie - the dragon sounds to be very protective. To increase the tension of your story, vary your sentences for impact. Great work - keep it up! - Mrs T
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