Kia ora Brodie, very cool background for this post I like how you have used images that must relate to your friends and what they are proud of. I like how much detail is in each interview and that your friends are proud of their achievements and also proud of having great friends and being in a great classroom. Next time you should add a slide about what you are proud of as I would like to know. Also remember to use your full sentences instead of starting each one with He is proud of.. You could join them together with conjunctions like ‘and’. Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Kia ora Brodie, very cool background for this post I like how you have used images that must relate to your friends and what they are proud of. I like how much detail is in each interview and that your friends are proud of their achievements and also proud of having great friends and being in a great classroom. Next time you should add a slide about what you are proud of as I would like to know. Also remember to use your full sentences instead of starting each one with He is proud of.. You could join them together with conjunctions like ‘and’.
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates